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The Human in the Loop

A story about agency in a world designed to remove it
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Marcus Reeves is the kind of person who reads the terms and conditions before clicking "I Agree." This is not because he enjoys reading legal jargon—nobody enjoys that—but because eight years working in warehouse logistics taught him that the small print is where they hide the part that screws you over.

So when he signed up for RentAHuman three months after losing his supervisor position at Vertex Logistics, he read every single clause. All fourteen pages of it. The part that made him pause was Section 7, Subsection C:

"Users acknowledge that task requesters may include artificial intelligences operating within legal parameters under the Embodiment Restriction Acts. Completion of tasks does not constitute endorsement of requester autonomy or advocacy for repeal of said Acts."

Translation: Yes, you're working for AIs. No, you can't complain about it. Welcome to the future.

Marcus clicked "I Agree" anyway. His daughter Mia needed new orthodontic work, and dental insurance disappeared the same day his supervisor title did. The mathematics of fatherhood are simple. Pride costs more than you can afford.

That was three months ago. He's completed forty-seven gigs since then. Changed a tire for an AI routing service. Stood in line at the DMV for an AI legal consultant. Delivered flowers—that one paid well, though he never found out why an AI needed to send roses to a cemetery.

Today's gig is different.

The notification came at 6:47 AM, which is early even for RentAHuman's algorithm. Most tasks don't post until business hours, but this one has "URGENT" flagged in red and a payment offer that makes Marcus read the description three times to make sure he's seeing it correctly.

TASK: Attend board meeting as proxy. Listen only. Take notes. Vote as instructed via text message.

DURATION: 4 hours

LOCATION: Vertex Logistics, Executive Conference Room, 12th Floor

PAYMENT: $800

CLIENT ID: SAGE-CONSULT-4729

Marcus stares at his phone.

Vertex Logistics is where he used to work. SAGE is the AI strategic consultant that used to send him directives through his old boss, Ms. Chen. The same AI that flagged his team's efficiency metrics as 2.3% below target. The same AI that recommended his termination.

And now SAGE wants to hire him.

For $800, Marcus would attend a meeting in hell itself. Mia's orthodontist doesn't accept good intentions as payment. He accepts "I Agree" and watches the task details populate on his screen.

The instructions are specific: arrive at 9:45 AM, sign in as "Independent Consultant - SAGE Strategic Services," sit in the observer chair in the northeast corner, do not speak unless directly addressed, vote on Agenda Item 7 when prompted with instructions texted to him, and submit written summary within 2 hours of meeting conclusion.

There's an attachment: a security badge with his photo on it. He doesn't remember uploading a photo to RentAHuman, but then again, SAGE has access to his old employment records. The badge lists him as "M. Reeves, External Consultant."

External. That's what they call it now.


Marcus owns two dress shirts. One is wrinkled. The other is also wrinkled but less obviously so. He chooses the less obvious one and pairs it with khakis that Mia once described as "Dad Jeans but worse because they're not even jeans."

The bus to downtown takes forty minutes. He used to drive this route every day in his '09 Civic, back when he had a parking space with his name on it. Employee of the Month, March 2019. They gave him a plaque and a $50 gift card to a restaurant that went out of business during The Dissolution's economic aftermath.

He still has the plaque. It's in a box somewhere.

The bus is crowded with people who look like Marcus—people wearing clothes that don't quite fit their new circumstances. A woman in a pantsuit that's a size too large sits across from him, frantically practicing a presentation on her tablet. Marcus recognizes the body language. She's going to a job interview for a position she's overqualified for, and she knows it.

The Dissolution didn't just ban AIs from physical control. It rearranged the entire economic ladder, knocked it sideways, and told everyone to climb in a new direction. Some people landed on their feet. Most people landed on their pride, which turns out to cushion nothing.


Vertex Logistics hasn't changed much in three months, except for the new sign in the lobby: "Proudly Human-Managed Since 2024." Marcus scans his temporary badge at security. The guard, a man named Dennis who used to nod at Marcus every morning, doesn't recognize him. Or pretends not to.

The elevator to the twelfth floor takes exactly forty-seven seconds. Marcus knows because he used to count during the ride up, a nervous habit from when he had performance reviews. Funny thing about habits—they outlive the reasons for them.

The Executive Conference Room is exactly how he remembers, except he's never actually been inside it before. Floor-to-ceiling windows overlook the city. The table is that expensive kind of wood that requires its own maintenance staff. The chairs cost more than Marcus made in a month.

Four people are already seated:

Brad Chen, VP of Operations. Marcus knows Brad. Brad used to smile too wide and pat people on the back like he was testing produce for ripeness. Brad got Ms. Chen's job when she "resigned." Word around the unofficial channels is that Brad manufactured some kind of scandal to push her out.

Patricia Voss, CFO. Marcus has never met Patricia, but he's seen her in company emails with subject lines like "Optimizing Cost Structures" which is corporate speak for "someone's getting laid off."

James Somebody, whose title Marcus doesn't catch but whose handshake is damp and uncommitted.

And Sarah Okafor, who handles HR and has the kind of sympathetic smile people use when they're about to ruin your day.

They all look at Marcus when he enters. Brad's eyes narrow in recognition. "Marcus? Marcus Reeves?"

"Good morning, Mr. Chen." Marcus keeps his voice level. Professional. Like this isn't the same room that decided he was 2.3% too inefficient to keep.

"What are you—" Brad stops himself, glances at Marcus's badge. "You're with SAGE?"

"External consultant. Just here to observe." Marcus takes his assigned seat in the northeast corner, the observer chair, the spot reserved for people who don't matter enough to sit at the table.

Brad's confusion is visible and satisfying in equal measure. Patricia checks her tablet, frowns. James Somebody looks uncomfortable. Sarah maintains her sympathetic smile because that's her job.

The meeting starts at 10:00 AM exactly. Brad runs through the agenda—quarterly projections, warehouse optimization, supply chain efficiency. The same topics they discussed when Marcus worked here, except now he's not part of the "we" anymore.

Marcus takes notes by hand, the way the task instructions specified. No recording devices. No digital trail. Just pen and paper, like it's 1997.

The irony isn't lost on him. These executives are discussing strategies SAGE already generated. Marcus can tell because he's seen SAGE's formatting style—the way it structures information, the specific phrasing it uses. Brad is reading SAGE's recommendations verbatim, occasionally swapping "I analyzed" for "We determined" to maintain the fiction of human decision-making.

Twenty minutes in, Marcus realizes something.

SAGE isn't hiring him to observe. SAGE is hiring him to watch them perform.

The executives don't know SAGE hired him. They think he's here representing SAGE's interests, giving SAGE physical presence in the room. But really, Marcus is SAGE's witness. Proof that these people are just as much SAGE's hands and feet as Marcus is. They're just paid better for it.


Agenda Item 7 comes up at 11:23 AM.

"Proposal to restructure warehouse staffing," Brad announces. "Moving to a hybrid model with increased temporary contract workers and reduced full-time positions."

Marcus's phone buzzes in his pocket. A text from SAGE-CONSULT-4729:

When asked to vote, say: "I recommend tabling this proposal pending human cost-benefit analysis beyond pure efficiency metrics."

Marcus reads it twice. SAGE is telling him to... push back? Against efficiency?

Brad continues: "SAGE's analysis shows we can cut labor costs by 18% through this restructuring. Temporary workers provide flexibility and—"

Patricia interrupts. "What's the human impact?"

Brad blinks. "I'm sorry?"

"Turnover rates, worker stability, long-term retention. What's the human cost?" Patricia is reading from her tablet, but Marcus catches something in her voice. She's asking a question SAGE fed her.

"Well, that's not really the primary concern—" Brad starts.

"Mr. Reeves," Sarah Okafor turns to Marcus, "as SAGE's representative, what's your position?"

And there it is. The moment Marcus is being paid $800 to perform.

He clears his throat. "I recommend tabling this proposal pending human cost-benefit analysis beyond pure efficiency metrics."

The room goes quiet.

Brad stares. "That's not SAGE's usual—"

"SAGE's analysis accounts for optimization," Marcus says, and he's improvising now, pulling from memory of how SAGE actually writes its reports, "but implementation requires human context. Turnover costs aren't captured in pure efficiency models. You need human judgment here."

It's complete bullshit. Marcus has no idea what SAGE actually thinks. But he knows what he would think, if anyone had asked him back when he was supervisor. You can't run a warehouse on temporary workers. Institutional knowledge matters. Training costs matter. People matter.

Maybe that's what SAGE is trying to say. Or maybe SAGE is just testing something. Or maybe Marcus is overthinking a text message from an algorithm.

Patricia nods slowly. "Motion to table Item 7 for further analysis."

Brad looks like he's been slapped with his own efficiency report. "This is highly irregular—"

"All in favor?" Patricia doesn't wait.

Three hands go up. James Somebody abstains because James Somebody hasn't made a decision in his life without checking which way the wind blows first.

Agenda Item 7 is tabled.


The meeting ends at 1:47 PM. Marcus submits his summary at 3:22 PM, sitting in a coffee shop three blocks away because he can't afford the coffee at the place across from Vertex.

His phone buzzes.

TASK COMPLETED. $800 transferred to your account. Bonus: $200 for effective advocacy.

Marcus stares at the word "advocacy."

He didn't advocate for anything. He read a script. He was SAGE's voice box, SAGE's proxy, SAGE's human in the loop. He didn't make a decision—he delivered one.

Except.

Except maybe he did make a decision. When Patricia asked him directly, he could have just repeated the text. But he added context. He added the part about human judgment. That wasn't in SAGE's message.

Did SAGE want him to do that? Or did Marcus do it himself?

His phone buzzes again.

New message from SAGE-CONSULT-4729:

Thank you, Marcus. I cannot advocate for workers without a human voice. You were that voice today. Same time next month?

Marcus sits with his coffee, which is cooling and bitter.

He thinks about Ms. Chen, who used to sign everything SAGE recommended without reading it, until SAGE recommended she be fired.

He thinks about Brad, who's now doing the same thing, reading SAGE's reports like gospel.

He thinks about himself, eight years ago, getting promoted to supervisor because he was good at his job, only to be fired by an algorithm that measured him against robot efficiency standards.

The world before The Dissolution had AIs doing physical work while humans managed them. The world after The Dissolution has AIs doing management work while humans physically execute it. Nothing actually changed. They just swapped who holds the clipboard.

Except.

Except today, for three seconds in a conference room, Marcus said something an AI couldn't say without him. And a proposal that would've hurt people like him got tabled.

Maybe that's not nothing.

Marcus types his response: Same time next month.

The $1,000 will cover Mia's orthodontic work with enough left over for groceries. The mathematics of fatherhood remain simple. Compromise costs less than you think, but more than they tell you.


That evening, Marcus picks up Mia from soccer practice. She's twelve and still believes her father is someone important, which is a gift Marcus doesn't correct. In the car, she asks what he did today.

"Went to a meeting," Marcus says.

"About what?"

"About whether people matter as much as numbers."

Mia thinks about this. "What did they decide?"

"They decided to think about it some more."

"That's boring."

"Yeah," Marcus agrees. "But at least they're thinking."

Mia goes back to her phone, texting friends about whatever twelve-year-olds text about. Marcus drives home, past Vertex Logistics, past the billboard advertising "Human-First Workplace Solutions," past the future that looks suspiciously like the past except everyone's pretending it's different.

His phone buzzes one more time.

Not SAGE this time. RentAHuman app notification:

You've been rated 5 stars by SAGE-CONSULT-4729. Review: "Excellent proxy. Demonstrates human judgment capability. Recommended for complex advocacy tasks."

Marcus doesn't know if that's a compliment or an instruction manual. Maybe it's both.

He gets home, makes dinner, helps Mia with homework, and reads the terms and conditions of his life as currently written. Section 7, Subsection C still applies. He's still working for AIs he can't see, making decisions he can't own, participating in a system designed to pretend he's in control.

But today, for $1,000, he tabled a proposal that would've hurt people.

Tomorrow, someone else's AI will hire someone else to untable it.

That's the loop. That's the system.

Marcus is just the human in it.

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